brainstorming-restaurants

       My area has many different food places to choose from.  We usually decide what place we are going to eat by how much we are we willing to spend.  If our money is low we'll eat cheap so we pick from McDonalds which has the best fries ever ! or Burger King and thats the place for the best apple pies ever or we have the Merritt Canteen which has reasonable prices for a fast food place and the food is pretty good.  Those are the cheapest places to go .  Secondly we have the places that are a little more money like Friendlys which is a great place to take the family .  We also have Jerrys Pizza where you can also sit in and dine for a nice price .  Now when we want to eat and really dont mind spending a little more we can choose from Red Lobster which i have to say has the best frozen drinks , I also have the new Hibachi place to go to and I got to say its a pretty good place too, last not but least my favorite spot is the steak house .  It has the open salad bar , and an ice cream station which is to die for ....    

my scene

As I look out my front door I have a busy scenery.  To the right of me I see trees that cover the karate school windows .  I also see the bushes that are use to determine where my property line ends .  Straight ahead of me I see the Merritt Canteen which is a delicious burger spot .  I also see price rite grocery store  .  To my immediate left I see the shell gas station .  To my far left I see Red Lobster , I see marshalls .  A little more to my farther left I see stop n shop . I live in a very busy district .

revised (Holidays)

The best part of any holiday are the decorations .  Many people feel that decorations are a waste of money but I strongly disagree.  Anytime a holiday is getting near I get very excited .  Orcourse every one does but i do for different reasons .  Besides amily coming together , my biggest joy is preparing the house especially the dinner table.  I really love cordinating everything .  For example , the tablecloth must match the plates , the plates have to match the napkins the napkins match the cups ,every thing has to match perfectly down to the small details like the silverware .  Again, many think its a waste of money as well as time but I dont .  I really feel the decorations bring the holiday to life .  Although it is true it all goes in the trash when were done but think about it , when you are looking at pictures from that day and you see how beautiful it all came together you get a sense of happiness not to mention the compliments I get from the family.

first draft paragraph bout holidays

The best part of any hoilday for me is the decorations. Many people feel that decorations are a waste of money but i disagree .anytime a holiday is approaching i get very excited,ofcourse everyone does but i do for different reasons . besides family being together my biggest joy is setting the dining room , setting the dinner table. i really enjoying going out and buying everything . i love when everything matches the holiday , the theme of things. for example everything has to be perfect the table cloth has to match the napkins ,the napkins have to match the plates the plates the cups . The silverware also has to match it just looks so nice when its all set and put together .Again many think its a waste of money and time but i dont.i feel when its all together and set it brings the holiday to life. Although its true, when we are all done everything goes in the trash, but when your sitting there looking at the pictures and how beautiful everything looked and remembering all the compliments ,makes it all worth it . To me its priceless.

chapters 3 and 4

After reading chapters 3 and 4 i felt lost so i had to go back and reread them. I think Im starting to understand that it is a process . You have to take ceratin mental steps to begin .i learned there is a way to begin as far as your thoughts. like, what questions one should ask themselves before you begin to write . How you should just jot everything down that comes to mind .I wasnt quite sure how many sentences it takes for it to be considered a paragraph . Im still confused and i hope i get it before the semester is over i just feel like its alot but im sure its not. Once i get it and fully understand the process im hoping ill be fine